Crafting Persuasive Proposals: Avoiding 3 Common Mistakes

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Sharí Alexander - Message Strategist and Executive Communication Coach
Written by Sharí Alexander

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Creating a proposal is both exciting and nerve-wracking, as it's the moment of truth that determines whether or not you will land a deal. However, many professionals make some common mistakes when crafting proposals, which can lead to a lack of success. In this article, we will discuss three major reasons why your proposals may not be working and how to overcome them.

  1. Premature Proposals
    The most significant mistake professionals make is drafting proposals too soon. When a prospect asks you to draft a proposal before you have all the necessary information, it can lead to a generic and ineffective document. To avoid this mistake, it's important to start by asking yourself, "What do I need to know?" rather than jumping right into the proposal. Take the time to get to know your prospect's specific goals and expectations before creating a persuasive proposal. Schedule a call or conversation to clarify their needs and requirements, and only then move on to crafting a proposal.
  2. Overwhelming Proposals
    Another common mistake is to offer everything in your arsenal of services when creating your proposal. This approach can be counterproductive, especially when working with a new client. Rather than overwhelming them with all that you have to offer, focus on presenting options. Break your proposal into parts, or offer Bronze, Silver, and Gold options, which can make it easier for your prospect to choose what suits them best. By giving them the choice to say yes in three different ways, you increase your chances of winning the deal.
  3. Lack of a Strong "Why"
    A reject-able proposal is all "How" and no "Why." To stand out from your competitors, your proposal needs to include why your project is important, and how it can help your prospect achieve their specific goals. For example, instead of stating that you can save your prospect seven hours a week through your efficiency consulting, explain why that's important. Help your prospect understand how this saved time can improve their overall energy and what they can do with those seven extra hours. By explicitly covering the "Why" of your project, you can demonstrate your value and set yourself apart from the competition.

Crafting effective proposals is key to landing a great deal. By avoiding these common mistakes, you can create persuasive and compelling proposals that win over your clients. Remember to take the time to get to know your prospect's specific needs, offer options, and focus on the "Why" of your project. These strategies can help you create proposals that are both effective and successful.

Sharí Alexander

Sharí Alexander

B2B Speech & Event Strategy Consultant

Sharí Alexander is the founder of Elevated Influence and the creator of Presence-Forward Marketing™, a human-centered approach to crafting B2B speaking engagements that land clients, not just compliments.  

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